What Are You Wearing?

[droit]

Thanks. You're right about accents being defining. I'm just having a hard time coming up with one. The eyeglasses, though not something that would fit this character, are on the right track.

[B2]

I got a piece of jewelry that was "twin pretty fancy chokers" (only, you know, with other adjectives" because I felt that "a pair of twin" was redundant.

That's something to think about, if you wanted, for your clasps...and it would give you room to slap a show on it to describe them.

[Nilandia]

I think they were twin vaalin wire chokers. Gothique sold them in her farewell auction.

Gretchen

[droit]

okay, "a pair of twin" is redundant. Two questions: how would you parse that to fit the 15/15/15 rules? I'd like to keep "cloak/clasps" in there, but "clasps" has to be alone in the last field.

Second, any help with this show I just came up with:
Little more than rough, wrought-iron triangles set against disks of burnished brass and strung together with a strong chain of iron links, these cloak clasps are abstract representations of the jagged peaks after which they were modeled.

[Celephais]

some twin peaks/cloak/clasps ... ?

[droit]

some twin peaks/cloak/clasps ... ?

Hah! One could be David Lynch and the other, Kyle MacLachlan.

[Shari]

You see Jesae Jiin.
She appears to be a Sylvankind of the Lassaran D'ahranal.
She is shorter than average and appears to be in the bloom of youth. She has vivacious, bronze-sparked olive green eyes and sun-blushed fair skin. She has hip-length, champagne blonde hair that slinks down her back in glossy, sharply kinked waves. She has a delicately sculpted face, an upturned nose and slightly-curved, naturally tinged pink lips.
She has a set of five lustrous onyx rings in her left eyebrow, and a faint curl of tattooed jade smoke at her nape that rises sinuously up her neck.
She is in good shape.
She is holding an exquisite circular mirror ornamented in jewel-tone mosaic cloisonne in her right hand.
She is wearing a thin-stranded bronze ferroniere supporting a small bloodjewel, a double rope necklace of gleaming bloodjewels, a soft fox fur stole slashed with jet edged burgundy silk, a deep burgundy marbrinus bodice trimmed in bronze lace, some slim-cut black linen pants, and a pair of black leather boots propped on tall skinny heels.

[Beguiler]

You see XXXXXXX.
She appears to be a Half-Elf from Ta'Vaalor.
She appears to be in the bloom of youth and short. She has gold-flecked jade green eyes and milky white skin. She has knee-length, dark red hair coiled in a sleek braided coronet with wispy curled tendrils at the temple. She has a heart-shaped face, a small nose and slightly pointed ears.
She has a set of five lustrous onyx rings set along the slender tips of her pointed ears, a thin black vaalin stud in her right nostril, a chain of intricate runes tattoo on her ankle, and an exquisitely inked imp tattoo on her wrist..
She is in good shape.
She is wearing a delicate teardrop ruby pendant, a hooded ebony velvet and silk cloak secured with a brooch, an off-the-shoulder fitted black silk elven dress back-laced with ruby-dusted golden ribbons, some sheer black stockings, a slim ruby-set gold anklet, and some gold-beaded ebony slippers with sharply pointed toes.

Mostly off the shelf, but I like it..

[Martaigne]

[Mularos]

You see XXX XXX.
He appears to be a Dwarf.
He is average height and appears to be young and robust. He has piercing ice blue eyes and ivory skin. He has shoulder length, straight raven black hair swept back from the temples.
He has a clenched fist tattoo on his arm, a bleeding heart tattoo on his wrist, and a tattooed symbol of Mularos on his neck.
He is in good shape.
He is wearing a fiery crimson spidersilk cap adorned with blood-red rubies, a string of black prayer beads, a bone-buttoned black brocade longcloak, a velvety soft deep black rose tucked behind one ear, a pair of sleek black-tinted glasses, some sharp diamond-tipped claws, some silver-insigiled ebon silk casting gloves, a bloodstone Mularos symbol, a subtly tooled ebon leather thigh-sheath, some black-ora inset double leather, a rune wristlet, a blood-red crystal-inset platinum ring, a black silk sash, a small bone-beaded pouch, some slim-cut black linen pants, some leather scaled combat boots, and a viciously barbed leather whip.