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    Default Anyone else write poetry?

    So for the main part you're a creative bunch who enjoy RP (note not all!) so I'm sure you're creative in other areas too. For me I had never considered writing a poem or any such 'wussy' activity until out of the blue, I wrote one for for a girl around 7 years ago who I had been enjoying spending sometime with for several months, over which our relationship had evolved. We both knew that ultimately, through reasons beyond our control it had run its course. She was under continual pressure from her ex whom she had left for me and she was also about to leave the country to complete her education activities abroad and needed a break from everything before she broke.

    I wrote a poem for her that I gave her when she came around to my place the night before she left for Germany. She was instructed to take away and to not read until she had reached her destination, I knew later from our contact that it had made her cry. I hadn't wanted her to read it before she went away because it would have made it harder for her emotionally to leave, which, although might have been what I selfishly might have wanted, it wasn't the right thing for me to do to keep her here and inhibit her studies.

    So anyway, back to the point, I found it a great medium for release of thoughts and feelings that often get stored up inside and eat away at us, and thus is born some of my creativity. I have wrote a number of pieces since then, some have been published but all have been wrote when I've felt the need for release.

    This thread is for all of you to share your own poetry with us, I'll start the ball rolling with one I wrote for that special person I knew back then, it's called Dreamer. It's not the one I gave to her all those years ago as simply, that one will remain our own. To the same end, she will never know this one exists. Please add your own work to this thread.

    Vimp.

    Dreamer

    As darkness draws, I close my eyes, relinquishing my mind to dreamful sighs.
    For the night is the time of tranquil sensations, m
    y spirit can be free of its heartfelt lamentations.
    Freed from my conscious, my heart comes unbound, f
    lying upon a whisper, quiet, not a sound,
    Able at last, to begin to dream, m
    y secrets, my longings, released in a stream.
    For dreams are a time when hopes can come true, i
    n these precious times, my thoughts reflect you.
    Within my heart, a special place I hide, a
    secret place where only you reside,
    It's full of my feelings so pure, so true, m
    y desire, my passion, my love for you.
    My love of a flower, an English rose, a
    fountain of beauty where charisma flows,
    An angel of kindness and compassion right through,
    I could never help my falling for you.
    And although my love, I never meant this to be,
    I cannot betray what you stir within me,
    For you are the flame that sparks my fire, f
    illing me throughout with loving desire,
    To tell you "I love you" each and every day, i
    t's so very hard to keep locked away.
    I wish that at times, my dreams wouldn't end, f
    or that way my heart, I'd not have to mend,
    As within my dreams, we can be together, l
    oving and laughing, forever not never.
    But darkness must fade, light heralds the dawn,
    I'm pulled from my reverie a little forlorn,
    But upon my face, I shall wear a quiet smile, as within my dream, we walked together for a while.


    AL
    Last edited by Vimp; 02-21-2006 at 03:14 PM.

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    I love it..and perhaps if I get brave enough, I'll post a poem or two as well. thanks for opening this type of thread.

    Merji's Muse
    ~K~

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    Milk Milk
    Lemonade
    Around The Corner
    Fudge
    Is Made


    Beautiful isn't it.
    We'll drink, and drink, and drink, and drink, and drink, and drink and fight! Hey!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xyelin
    Milk Milk
    Lemonade
    Around The Corner
    Fudge
    Is Made


    Beautiful isn't it.
    I'm glad to see the mentality of these boards is maintaining its current second grade level.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jorddyn
    I'm glad to see the mentality of these boards is maintaining its current second grade level.

    Jorddyn

    That's clearly Third Grade Ill have you!
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    I write occasionally.. here's an old one..

    Listening To The Rain

    I sit in darkness
    in it's depths I hear it
    The rain
    It drips down the window
    A maze of minature rivers
    My heart beats in time
    in time with the drops
    I sit in darkness
    the shadows a blanket
    they cover me
    listening to the rain
    I know it's feel
    I know it's taste
    my skin knows it's caress
    the rain blankets the world
    changing all the colors
    washing the air
    cleansing it
    cleansing my soul
    as I sit in darkness
    Listening
    listening to the rain

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    At the red river,
    take the dirt road.

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    Vaguely subject (fantasy/GS) appropriate. I write quite a lot of poetry. Villanelles have always been one of my favorite forms.

    :::::::::::::::::::::

    Mordred

    I threw the lady back into the lake
    and even though I had to really try
    I broke the sword that did not break

    I took every chance I could take
    to escape even though I knew not why
    I threw the lady back into the lake

    I had it all and all I did forsake
    because it was every moment a lie
    I broke the sword that did not break

    ask me later about the life I'll make
    ask me later once I figure out how to cry
    I threw the lady back into the lake

    still it echoes in my parting wake
    I thought I could learn how to fly
    I broke the sword that did not break

    for my sake and for your sake
    maybe I'm brave enough now that I
    I threw the lady back into the lake
    I broke the sword that did not break
    Last edited by Warriorbird; 02-20-2006 at 03:45 PM.

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    Do I write poetry?

    Fuck no.

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    For someone who's been writing poems for 7 years
    I'd have thought you could fullfil me one wish
    To learn the fucking meaning of Paragraphs
    Especially since you've been 'published'.

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