Sadly, yes, most of those alters on the (FEATURES) are wordy, but, in my defense it was extremely difficult and like pulling teeth to even get that when more simple elegant words were used. The GMs I've interacted with to get her features done have not been.. flexible. But, the funny thing is, her eyes are the ONLY color that don't belong and bonus to me, it has an RP reason behind it. TYVM. So, before you spout out OMG! Horrible Features! Look at what we have to work with IG now, as apposed to say.. 3 years ago. It's a real PITA. Amazing that we have to resort to plain over-common words because they are revamping the alter system (again) *shrugs*