Question about movement script

[HermieTheDentist]

Here's what I have:
pause 1
put climb large rope
pause 1
pause 1
put jump floor
waitfor roundtime
pause 2
Goto: swim1
(HERE IS WHERE MY QUESTION BEGINS: I need to put in a fail check and RT check in a the part where you have to swim the river to get from the Illi side to the Vaalor side of the river. Help me correct these mistakes or make improvements please.)
SWIM1:
put swim river
waitfor RT
match: success goto swim2
match: failure goto Swim1
SWIM2:
put swim south side
waitfor roundtime
pause 2
GOTO Continue
CONTINUE:
put climb ledge
waitfor roundtime
pause 2
put climb rope
waitfor roundtime
pause 2
put climb thick rope
waitfor roundtime
pause 2
move s
move sw
move s
move s
move s
move sw
move s
move s
move s
move se
move sw
move s
put jump rock
pause 1
pause 1
move sw
put climb oak
put post def
pause 1
pause 1
move s
move sw
put go path
put ;go2 town

[Tillmen]

;go2 shortcut=on

[BriarFox]

;go2 shortcut=on

^ Love the shortcut feature.

[m444w]

;go2 shortcut=on

This kills younger characters that can't jump the bridges.

[BriarFox]

Has level 60ish creatures on it, too. Not for the poorly trained.