Ericos

[Nieninque]

Name: Lord Ericos Riyo
Profession: Magician
Race: Sylvankind Gender: Male
Clan: Tyesteron D'ahranal
Follower of Gosaena
Strongest foe vanquished: an umbral force sentry

Quote: "You life is therfore over."

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Good quote ;)

[Some Rogue]

Too bad it's got word spelled wrong

[Nieninque]

two actually

"You" should probably be "your"
and "therfore" should be "therefore"

funny aint it?

[Ericos]

Thanks for pointing it out. Yet you could have jus told me IG. Good try on being funny tho.

Ericos

[HarmNone]

If you want to fix it, Ericos, also put commas on both sides of "therefore". :)

HarmNone

[Ericos]

Why would I want commas?

[HarmNone]

Heh. Because, that would make the punctuation in the sentence correct. Anyhow, as I said...it's something you can do if you want to. :)

HarmNone

[Ericos]

So (I changed it abit) Quote: "Your life is "therefore" forfeit." that correct?

[Artha]

Correct: Your life is, therefore, forfeit.

[Nieninque]

to make it proper english like

[Ericos]

Haha, alright thanks guys.

[Nieninque]

BTW ,= a comma
"=inverted comma/speech marks/quotations marks

[HarmNone]

Welcome, Ericos! :)