Alter help

[Eylanthriel]

So I just purchased some new mbp but it looks like this:

You tap a hammered silvery steel breastplate inlaid with pearl and emerald lilies that you are wearing.

So I would like to get it scroll altered but I am not the greatest with alter wording.

I like simple alters, my last set of armor was vaalorn-studded black body armor (brig).

Any help would be appreciated. Thanks

[Jahira]

I agree that is hideous. Try something like:

a hammered golden steel breastplate inlaid with diamond and ruby lilies

or

a hammered black steel breastplate inlaid with lilies of death and destruction

[iJin]

Please tell me the second one is a joke.

Right?

[Gelston]

get it altered to:

a metal breastplate

[Jahira]

maybe this will help Zuie:

A deathhammered night black steel death-breastplate inlaid with demonly lilies of death and destruction and darkness

[Jahira]

get it altered to:

a metal breastplate

that might be the best alter EVER

Althought is it a metal breastplate or SOME metal breastplate?