English Majors? Editing help?

Its short and simple, I just need a bit of help editing it. I had to write this up for the basis of a brief I need to give to my higher ups and could use some help making it a bit more pretty.

If anyone is willing to help me out Please drop me a u2u

[Trinitis]

It's short and simple. I just need some help editing it. I had to write this up for a briefing I need to give to my superior officers, and could use some help making it a bit more professional.



There, much better!

Hee! /flees.

gee thanks :)
Aww well ill figure it out on my own.

[Trinitis]

Hehe, I'm just messing with ya. :P

You'd be better off with someone other then me, thats for sure. I'm horrible with spelling.

spelling is fine passive voice kicks my ass though :(

[Trinitis]

Is it sensitive? Just post it and let everyone work it over. :)

naw its all open source info, just dont feel like posting it because its job related

Edit: if it was sensitive i wouldent be doing this ;)

[Edited on 6-20-2005 by Dave]

[Killer Kitten]

If you still need help with it, you can email it to me at Tilone@aol.com.

I'll have some time tomorrow and I could play with it a bit if you want.

Best format is to cut and paste it into your email, or send as a Word document.

ive got it taken care of, thanks.