Quick Critique_ feedback appreciated

[Apotheosis]

I'm working on a bunch of logos for a class project, and I seem to be hung up on this particulare graphic.

Supposed to be some lips with a dice in its mouth...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v704/gjp/lips.jpg


just vote on your opinion, post feedback if needed

well, that's a bit big, not sure how to condense it.. anyway

[Edited on 4-5-2005 by Yswithe]

Not to be offensive, but I have to choose option #1 without some backround on that.

- Arkans

[Apotheosis]

no background, it's a black and white logo, supposed to be on a white background, can do reverse too

[Jahira]

Looks like maybe some lips with dice in them????? Just a guess

[Jahira]

Oh, shit. Might help if I read the caption above the picture.....Although those lines on the lips sorta like like Pili or Fimbria or whatever the hell cells use to swim with.

I mean... it does look like what you wanted it to look like. Can't say I'm a fan if there is no meaning for it or represents a company or group.

- Arkans

[Apotheosis]

Originally posted by Arkans
I mean... it does look like what you wanted it to look like. Can't say I'm a fan if there is no meaning for it or represents a company or group.

- Arkans

I'll have to explain the outline of the assignment, but it took 7 weeks and had ALOT of phases, if I'm drunk enough one night, I'll put this project up on a gallery site, explaining the details, but lets just say it was massive, and this step was the end result of the first half, and resulted in 12 objects turned into black and white logos similar to the one above.

ie: it initially took on a meaning, but then went corporate :D

[Suppa Hobbit Mage]

it looks like lips with dice in them, saw that before I read your note.

The lips look... hairy or something though. Funky.

[Apotheosis]

yeah, i'm trying to find a way to simulate the curvature/wrinkles in lips..

[Gan]

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[Skeeter]

Looks like a flat tire just pissed off a bunch of people at the craps table.