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04-04-2020, 09:34 AM
My idea albeit serious super rough draft. Critique?
A smooth pine coffer
Look coffer
This coffer is constructed of smooth sanded pine. A glossy oil coats the wide variegated grains in the wood, bringing out the contrast in its dark and light colored lines. Three parallel compartments make up the interior of this finely crafted box. The first having a mild slope towards the center which holds a small plate striated from several cuts of a razor. A small mithril rail extends from beneath the plate into the adjacent compartments.
Open coffer
You gently lift the lid of the pine coffer. The striated plate retracts and a miniature mithril vice extends from the center compartment.
Put razor in my coffer
You carefully align your flame etched fletching razor in the miniature mithril vice and tighten it into place.
Put feather in my coffer
You place your bundle of black raven feathers into the first compartment of a smooth pine coffer.
Close my coffer
As you close the lid of the pine coffer the slope of the first compartment lifts from a mithril rail pushing a single black raven feather onto the striated plate. As the feather settles into place two small guides lift from the plate straightening the feather further. The flame etched fletching razor then slides across the black raven feather cutting it into glossy black fletchings which are then pushed with the guides into the final compartment.
Roundtime: 10 seconds
Look in my coffer
Inside the coffer is a bundle of black raven feathers, a flame etched fletching razor and a bundle of glossy black fletchings.
Get fletching from my coffer
You slide the draw open on the third compartment and remove a three glossy black fletchings.
A smooth pine coffer
Look coffer
This coffer is constructed of smooth sanded pine. A glossy oil coats the wide variegated grains in the wood, bringing out the contrast in its dark and light colored lines. Three parallel compartments make up the interior of this finely crafted box. The first having a mild slope towards the center which holds a small plate striated from several cuts of a razor. A small mithril rail extends from beneath the plate into the adjacent compartments.
Open coffer
You gently lift the lid of the pine coffer. The striated plate retracts and a miniature mithril vice extends from the center compartment.
Put razor in my coffer
You carefully align your flame etched fletching razor in the miniature mithril vice and tighten it into place.
Put feather in my coffer
You place your bundle of black raven feathers into the first compartment of a smooth pine coffer.
Close my coffer
As you close the lid of the pine coffer the slope of the first compartment lifts from a mithril rail pushing a single black raven feather onto the striated plate. As the feather settles into place two small guides lift from the plate straightening the feather further. The flame etched fletching razor then slides across the black raven feather cutting it into glossy black fletchings which are then pushed with the guides into the final compartment.
Roundtime: 10 seconds
Look in my coffer
Inside the coffer is a bundle of black raven feathers, a flame etched fletching razor and a bundle of glossy black fletchings.
Get fletching from my coffer
You slide the draw open on the third compartment and remove a three glossy black fletchings.