Eye/Feature alteration. OMGHELPMEPLZ

[4a6c1]

Brainstorming for an eye alteration I'd like to get tonight.

Just in case my idea gets turned down or I change my mind before then (likely), I'm asking you people for every possible alternative you can think of because 'outside of the box' thought only works when I've had at least 2 hrs of sleep.

THANKS!

:heart:

----------> She has expressive, dark golden-hued auburn eyes. <--------- variations off of this plz

:spaz:

R

[Fallen]

Synonyms: eloquent, facund, meaningful, pregnant, rich, sententious, significant
Related Words: revealing, revelatory, suggestive; graphic, pictorial, vivid; alive, demonstrative, lively, responsive, senseful, spirited

Could keep swapping words out if they do not like expressive until you find one he will take.

[AnticorRifling]

She has eyes.


^ that would rule.

[Kitsun]

ROFL!

Pregnant eyes?

[4a6c1]

quote]Originally posted by AnticorRifling
She has eyes.


^ that would rule. [/quote]

:lol:

not helpful

I like spirited. Thats an awesome one I havent seen. Maaaaybe.

[Edited on 2-28-2005 by JihnasSpirit]

[Fallen]

She has eyes.


^ that would rule. >>

Laughs

Agreed. Go with that one.

[Wezas]

A better feature alter would be "She has one eye."

[4a6c1]

:lol2:

[Wezas]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
You see Angelynna the Healer.
She appears to be an Aelotoi of the Mrae'ni Clan.
She appears to be young and sprightly and taller than average. She has one lopsided eye and ivory skin.

That pwns so hard. You'd definately be unique.

[4a6c1]

I need different words for brown besides auburn.

[Artha]

It's an empath.


Be sure to get your eyes done in the ever original <emotion> <color> formula. You can also add something like boundless depths or maybe a line about how the eyes hypnotize you at the end.

[Wezas]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
I need different words for brown besides auburn.

She has one lopsided (walnut, mahogany, maple) eye and ivory skin.

[AnticorRifling]

Brown eye. Heh.

[DeV]

Can the eye be crossed, possibly? For added uniqueness and flair.

[4a6c1]

OOH! Mahogany is nice. I like that one.

so...

She has one lopsided mahogany eye that hypnotizes the chocolate from inside the candy store so she dosnt have to get her fat ass off the pavement in TSC.

too long? :sniffle:

[Wezas]

Originally posted by DeV
Can the eye be crossed, possibly? For added uniqueness and flair.

Or perhaps at least wandering/lazy.

[Wezas]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
She has one lopsided mahogany eye that hypnotizes the chocolate from inside the candy store so she dosnt have to get her fat ass off the pavement in TSC.


They'll want the "ass" changed and you'll need to spell out TSC. Other then that, looks great!

[StrayRogue]

You can't have different eyes. Remember that when you Attend eyes, it will rub your <colour> <adjective>/<adjective><colour> eyes.

[4a6c1]

Wezas Wezas.

It depends on the GM. :D

Seriously. I'm considering spirited and mahogany as replacements in case the original starts to bug me in between now and evening time. THANKS PEEPLZ

[Myitkyina]

...from inside the boundless depths of the candy store...

I don't know that you want to mention TSC in the description... you might eventually want to venture as far as Solhaven for shopping purposes, so it might be good to be geographically vague. Perhaps just end it at 'arse.'

[Wezas]

Originally posted by StrayRogue
You can't have different eyes. Remember that when you Attend eyes, it will rub your <colour> <adjective>/<adjective><colour> eyes.

Wasn't aware of that. Best you just stick with having one eye. :!:

[StrayRogue]

You have to have two eyes. :D

[Wezas]

Originally posted by StrayRogue
You have to have two eyes. :D

Jesus, spoil all our fun.

You should ask for an alter to make yourself blind.

[StrayRogue]

The structure is as followed:

S/he appears to be |age| and (height). S/he has (eye characteristic) (eye color) eyes and (complexion) skin. S/he has (hair length), (hair texture) (hair color) hair (hair quirk). S/he has (a/an, face) face, (a/an, nose) nose and (a/an, distinguishing mark). (Unique slot here.)

Everything with ()'s can be changed, that includes height - but not age. Parentheses with a/an inside means that the article will shift dependant upon the first letter. Distinguishing mark also has a singluar / plural function that comes into play - if the last word ends in 's' the article will not be in place. If it doesn't, the article will appear.

The unique slot needs to be a complete sentence (S/he has a birth mark on her eyebrow.), but anything that does not have its own slot can be put in there - well, those things that are allowed. I.e., no statures, postures, auras, etc.

As for length... the limit of taste will be reached before the technical limit in features. So you can't have a 10 word description for eyes. Most I'll allow for eyes is three things - two characteristics and a color. I.e., long-lashed, large mist-grey eyes.

[Czeska]

My empath does not have emotional eyes :mutter:

She has obsidian lined deep burgundy eyes and golden brown skin. She has thick, mahogany brown hair that falls in soft waves to the middle of her back.

[4a6c1]

She has spirited, golden-tinged dark mahogany eyes.

She has expressive, dark golden-hued auburn eyes.

Maybe? Yes? hmmm. Or switch the descriptor. hmmm. choices choices.

Edited to say: WHOA! Rules. awesome. Thank you StrayRogue.

[Edited on 2-28-2005 by JihnasSpirit]

[StrayRogue]

Expressive is over done.

[4a6c1]

Yeah, thats why I've been staring at it so I will get sick of it quicker and want something different. And asking for help. ;)

[StrayRogue]

I like the first one, with or without spirited.

[4a6c1]

I do to. :bouncy:

If I dont get any better ideas before evening I'm going to go with it.

[HarmNone]

If you're looking for shades of brown, amber is a possibility, as is chestnut.

[DCSL]

I like the many different shades of brown. Sienna, sorrel, burnet, sepia, umber, cinnamon, tawny... I'm partial to sepia 'cause I like drawing with it, heh.

[Ardwen]

Bah

She has large multifaceted bioluminescent bug eyes.


Ardwen

[4a6c1]

Alright. The best idea right now is....

She has soulful, golden-tinged deep mahogany eyes. (honestly I like the one lopsided candy hypnotizer better)


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Her eyes are chestnut right now and the 'nut' drives me errmm, nuts.

DCSL, dictionary.com gave me all those beautiful colors but infortunately none of them seem dark enough (or reddish enough or goldish enough) for the way I picture her eyes.

Christ I'm picky. You people are awesome for the help, anyways.

[4a6c1]

Originally posted by Ardwen
Bah

She has large multifaceted bioluminescent bug eyes.


Ardwen

:lol:

[Jolena]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
the 'nut' drives me errmm, nuts.

Can anyone say new SIG?! :lol:

[4a6c1]

:gawk:

you wouldnt

[Jolena]

Oh I can..and I will :)

[4a6c1]

Thats fine because:


Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
Awww. I am loved. Now get back in the kitchen and make me a samwich woman.

/flee/

You need to check the other thread honeymuffins.

[Jolena]

Hah! That might be something I'd consider quoting you on but the other is SO much more funny! :heart: Robin!

[4a6c1]

roflmao

back on topic plz. lopsided bug eyes

[Jolena]

Oh and on topic, I like spirited better then soulful :grin:

[4a6c1]

THANK YOU FOR THE HELPFUL INPUT JOLENA

<stares>

[Jolena]

:bleh:

[DCSL]

I like spirited more than soulful too. I hate to say it, but soulful makes me think of a bloodhound. Or, at the very least, a very cute puppy.

[Jolena]

:ohshit::gawk::lolwave:

I was so thinking that! Is it too late to add DCSL to my fav posters list?! :lol:

[Divinity]

She has one spunky brown eye? Hehe, ok seriously though..

Spirited is over done as well.

Some of my suggestions:

She has effervescent, golden-tinged mellifluous mahogany eyes.

I don't know, you can use these in place though:
audacious
vivacious
stimulating
exhiliarting

[Divinity]

How about..

She has effervescent, mahogany-fringed peru eyes.

[4a6c1]

:D

[4a6c1]

Whats peru look like?

[Jorddyn]

Originally posted by Divinity
How about..

She has effervescent, mahogany-fringed peru eyes.

I know effervescent can mean bubbly as in personality, but I would think her eyes were bubbling if I saw this.

Jorddyn, just sayin'

[Fallen]

Now I can say that without fear of reprisal from all the legions of women wowed by Fallen's PC's feature alters... or Fallen himself.>>

I don't have any feature alters...Thought this thread was more appropriate.

[Divinity]

Main Entry: ef·fer·vesce
Pronunciation: "e-f&r-'ves
Function: intransitive verb
Inflected Form(s): -vesced; -vesc·ing
Etymology: Latin effervescere, from ex- + fervescere to begin to boil, inchoative of fervEre to boil -- more at BREW
1 : to bubble, hiss, and foam as gas escapes
2 : to show liveliness or exhilaration



And.. Peru is a reddish-brown hue that has a light golden to it.

[Artha]

Mmm, boiling eyes.

[Fallen]

1 : to bubble, hiss, and foam as gas escapes >>

Help! My eyes are foaming, and there is some sort of gas escapature!!!111one!

[4a6c1]

Yeah....I really dont see my character playing the teapot role. :no:

[Divinity]

That'll teach me to never help again.

[Jorddyn]

Originally posted by Divinity
That'll teach me to never help again.

Er, sorry I shared my opinion?

Jorddyn

Whiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine. Neeeever heeeelp again! Waaa!


Am the the only one that liked the very first post?

- Arkans

PS: No boiling eyes

[Divinity]

No, I didn't take offense to people's opinions and I wasn't whining. Good grief.

[4a6c1]

Originally posted by Divinity
No, I didn't take offense to people's opinions and I wasn't whining. Good grief.

I love the word peru and am now looking for excuses to use it in Non-geographical conversations. :lol: But the description of effervescence was giggleworthy. Admit it.

PUT THE TOP ON THAT AELOTOI, SHES BUBBLING OVER!!!

Divinity, I shall demonstrate by adding your lovely and creative word to the distorted image I already have of my poor little bug, curteuosy of the PC hivebrain.

observe:

You see Angelynna the Healer.
She appears to be an Aelotoi of the Mrae'ni Clan.
She appears to be young and sprightly and taller than average. She has one lopsided twitchy poopbrown crosseye that stares in all directions as it effervesces, boiling over with prettyness and chocolate loving empathery. <text based narrator takes a breath> The goofy eye hypnotizes you so that you are healed instananeously like *BAM* magic (But you also feel disturbed and you think its because of the mechanics abuse. No you dont. Yes you do. Dont. Do. Fine. Feel for yourself.) and ivory skin. She has very long, flowing honey blonde hair. She has a delicate face and high cheekbones. She has a pair of pale golden wings.

:D

[Jorddyn]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit
You see Angelynna the Healer.
She appears to be an Aelotoi of the Mrae'ni Clan.
...She has one lopsided twitchy poopbrown crosseye that stares in all directions as it effervesces, boiling over with prettyness and chocolate loving empathery. <text based narrator takes a breath> The goofy eye hypnotizes you so that you are healed instananeously like *BAM* magic (But you also feel disturbed and you think its because of the mechanics abuse. No you dont. Yes you do. Dont. Do. Fine. Feel for yourself.) ... :D

See, you don't need our help at all :D

Jorddyn

[Ilvane]

Effervescent eyes would be wierd..heh.

No offense.

-A

[Amaron]

what happened to the getting chocolate from across the square part?

I like that part.

:cry:

J

[4a6c1]

The text based narrator killed the empath because he didnt want to have to say it.

[rupa]

RE: effervescent, mahogany-fringed peru eyes.
I know effervescent can mean bubbly as in personality, but I would think her eyes were bubbling if I saw this. -JorddynI was seeing the frothy fizz leaking from the corners of her eyes too... and I really am not a fan of DELVING for a word just to find one that is not overused.

I mean, if the adjective fits, use it. Who cares if it has been used before, it's better to properly express yourself than leave people staring at your character or item with a ponderous "WTF, mate?!"

[Kainen]

Originally posted by JihnasSpirit

Originally posted by Divinity
No, I didn't take offense to people's opinions and I wasn't whining. Good grief.

I love the word peru and am now looking for excuses to use it in Non-geographical conversations. :lol: But the description of effervescence was giggleworthy. Admit it.

PUT THE TOP ON THAT AELOTOI, SHES BUBBLING OVER!!!

Divinity, I shall demonstrate by adding your lovely and creative word to the distorted image I already have of my poor little bug, curteuosy of the PC hivebrain.

observe:

You see Angelynna the Healer.
She appears to be an Aelotoi of the Mrae'ni Clan.
She appears to be young and sprightly and taller than average. She has one lopsided twitchy poopbrown crosseye that stares in all directions as it effervesces, boiling over with prettyness and chocolate loving empathery. <text based narrator takes a breath> The goofy eye hypnotizes you so that you are healed instananeously like *BAM* magic (But you also feel disturbed and you think its because of the mechanics abuse. No you dont. Yes you do. Dont. Do. Fine. Feel for yourself.) and ivory skin. She has very long, flowing honey blonde hair. She has a delicate face and high cheekbones. She has a pair of pale golden wings.

:D

:lol:

[hectomaner]

Originally posted by Wezas
A better feature alter would be "She has one eye."

or how about, she has a brown eye.